Talk:Episode 1 - Rebirth of the land - Cure Virgo is Born!/@comment-174.78.194.252-20120323001102/@comment-86.9.8.221-20120324050047

thanks for the feedback it really helpful so we can develop it further. for me personally creative writing is very new to me so any suggestions are greatly appreciated. we purposely decided to not be to descriptive on transformations and attacks so the readers could create what they would think is cool as it were from what is said.

glad you like the mysterious cures, we have a brief story outline up to 35 with plans for what to do up to 50. we will say that the cures coming into the series is going be varried greatly and the first 2 tribes to awake definetly go through a rocky road. also we have returned to a style similar to splash star and futari precure where the "generals" will come in one at a time replacing the one defeated before it and we are working on their designs for the character section once they have entered the story.

i hope you enjoy episode 2 which should be completed in a week or so.